Making a warrior

[Firestar]

Firestar bounded up the rocks that led to the highledge. "everyone! Gather around! We have a warrior ceromony!"firestar said.

As cats gathered around thunderpaw and longclaw walked to the front of the group.

Firestar bounded down to thunderpaw and said "You have trained hard to learn the way of starclan. Do you promise to uphold the warrior code even at the risk of your life?"firestar said.

Longclaw's eyes beamed with proudness.

"yes"thunderpaw said.

"Your new name will now be thunderpelt. Starclan welcome you"Firestar said as he put his nose to the top of thunderpelts head.

Longclaw touched his muzzle to thunderpelts flank as the cats shouted "thunderpelt!thunderpelt!"

[singetail]

Coalclaw padded over and resed his tail tip on Thunderpelt's shoulder. "You'll be a grand warrior. May StarClan light your path." His eyes were bright, imagining when his apprentice would become a warrior

[Firestar]

"thank you"thunderpelt said.

~*thread over*~