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Post by Firestar on Sept 12, 2006 17:33:24 GMT -5
I am working on this book. I have recently started the first chapter. Almost done.Ill let yall know when i post it! It is well about graystripe finding a way back to his clan. Kep watch! <3 Bramblestar.
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Post by Firestar on Sept 17, 2006 12:08:43 GMT -5
Chapter 1
As Graystripe looked back out of the cramped twoleg trap, he longed to be back with his friends he had rescued.He watched as his companions fled away from the twolegs.Graystripe hated the way the air smelt.Everytime he breathed in,the stench stung his nostrels. Instead of feeling the cool leafs and grass under his paws, he felt cold,hard twoleg material. Graystripe cringed when a twoleg shouted something and the twoleg monster he was in began to shake and make a funny grumbling noise.Graystripe stared out as the twoleg monster started to move and he watched helplessly as he looked out at the only home he had ever known, was dissapearing. "Oh Starclan!, Why has this happened to me?"Graystripe wailed. He scratched desperatly at the trap door,but could not get it open. He let out a frustrated hiss. He had to get out somehow! "the clans will be leaving anyday and I need to be with them!"Graystripe wailed again. "They might leave me! Im Thunderclan deputy-They need me!"he mewed like a terrified kit. It seemed like it had been moons since he had been taken away,and he knew the clans had already left.How am I going to find them?he asked himself. He had to escape,he was thinking when suddenly the twoleg monster stopped. He heard the entrance to the monster open and sunlight,along with a horrible stench,poured in. A big twoleg was saying something as he picked up the trap. The twoleg took Graystripe into a twoleg building. He set the trap down and opened the trap door. Graystripe guessed that the twoleg didnt know that the door to the building door was still open. Graystripe dashed through the room and out the door. He had guessed the direction of where to go. While he was in the twoleg monster he had been keeping track of the last landmark of territory he had seen. It was Shadowclans and he could see, as he got closer, the fence that blocked some of it off from Carrion place. He ran as fast as he could on the little space beside the thunderpath, trying to get to Shadowclan territory.He ran with the speed of Starclan. He soon came to Shadowclan territory. He did not worry about a patrol, because no cats were in the territory because twolegs had destroyed the camp earlier.He could still hear twoleg monsters. He wondered how he was going to get pass From shadowclans territory into Thunderclans. He decided to avoid the camp by going behind it . He would go behind into Riverclan territory and go staight to sunning rocks. He knew Riverclan were still in their territory, but hoped they would let him through. After all, he did rescue Mistyfoot. As soon as he got near Shadowclan camp, he ran as fast as he could, before he knew it he was almost in the Riverclan camp. He decided to go in but it was deserted, but he heard something coming from the elders den. Was someone here? He was shocked, but happy, to see Speckletail and Frostfur, eders from Thunderclan! Then Shadepelt and Loudbelly, two elders from Riverclan, padded into the camp. "Graystripe?" Shadepelt asked,"why arent you gone?"Graystripe replied "I was captured by twolegs, then I escaped. I guess the clans have already left though, Im too late."his voice trailed of. "why are you you here?"he asked the elders. The elders explained. Graystripe was shocked about Mudfurs death. "do you know where the clans are headed to?" Graystripe asked. "I heard they were going to the moonstone and them moving on from their."Frostfur answered. "well I need to try and catch up with them, but do you need anymore freshkill? I can hunt before I go."he offered. "We have plenty."Loudbelly said,"I can still hunt!"he let out a mmrroow of laughter. "Well,may Starclan watch you all, and if you need to leave here you can go to the far west,which unknown territory, but mostly twolegs.I will miss you all and this place.Good-bye."he said as he gave them one long, last look. They said thier good-byes and Graystripe headed to sunning rocks. This would be the last time he saw Riverclan.
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